Mrs D

These are very good first drafts Lewis. You begin to unpick the use of colour well and explore the concept of the music promo. You need to be more explicit with your analysis in terms of music promo conventions and explore how 'star image' and 'band image' are created. Have another look at where you say there is only one camera shot. Do you mean viewpoint? You could also add more detail in terms of song lyrics matching the visuals. Keep up the good work.